Lost

Lost

A Poem by Bella❤❤❤

The opaque thoughts and conundrum clutter my brain,
I walk around in constant worry,
that leaves more than strain.

I can't live to shake at a simple pencil drop,
I just need this hand clenching debacle to stop,
I can't live to bite and twitch to use my voice,
I am in desperate need of some sort of rejoice,
I can't live to sit in silence, while my mind is a machine gun,
My body is so stiff, while my mind is on the run.

The opaque thoughts and conundrum fogs up her brain,
and she has lost all meaning to her name.
I cant find her, where is she ?
She's underneath the deep dark sea,
She's drowning,the water that was her thoughts has stolen her oxygen...
And there goes another teenager, lost again.

 

© 2015 Bella❤❤❤


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'Lost' -A Poem by Bella-is creative. Hi Bella, thanks for sharing your poem with the world. I read it and thought it was interesting. What's intriguing to me is how your wording switches from "I" to "She" to highlight the theme of the poem. I read it to mean that, somewhere in between "I" and "She," a person gets lost. "I" personalizes someone and "She" reflects, as if to say, "I feel lostsomewhere in the midst of myself and the person I think I should be." Please forgive me for being so bold. Only YOU know what your poem is truly saying. I can merely assess. I insert my own feelings about my own self in what I read, is why I interpret the poem as I have just explained. Keep writing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Bella❤❤❤

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Thank you very much for your feedback !



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'Lost' -A Poem by Bella-is creative. Hi Bella, thanks for sharing your poem with the world. I read it and thought it was interesting. What's intriguing to me is how your wording switches from "I" to "She" to highlight the theme of the poem. I read it to mean that, somewhere in between "I" and "She," a person gets lost. "I" personalizes someone and "She" reflects, as if to say, "I feel lostsomewhere in the midst of myself and the person I think I should be." Please forgive me for being so bold. Only YOU know what your poem is truly saying. I can merely assess. I insert my own feelings about my own self in what I read, is why I interpret the poem as I have just explained. Keep writing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bella❤❤❤

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your feedback !

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Bella❤❤❤

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