Auto Bio 2

it's my first peom in a long time and it's also a school project^.^ let me what chu think ^.^

 

I saw a mystical dream appear out of the clouds

I know the price for this faraway dreamla

I dreamed of magical places where i could fly far away with no worries

I flew into the clouds feeling as light as a feather with no worries to hold be back

I screamed when the chains came looking for us in the clouds

I touched whirling white wisps of air

I heard the whistling of the wind in my ears and the sounds or birds far away

I played tag running through the forerst chasing animals

I lied to you ; saying that i loved you and was as free as a bird

I sufferered from those three words warping themselves around my had saying i love you over and over

I cried at dreams i had givin up and for your poor soul to realize i was trapped

I met someone who turned my world upside down

Reviews

[A. Kress]

Bwahahhahaah this sucks you beaner faaaace. There is so many mess ups, you pupu beans.

[Chelsea L. Ellsworth]

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