Blood

dani helped me write the last few lines.

I play with my gun
Just for the fun.
The birds flew away in a flock.
Times ticking away from this clock.
Tonight I'll bleed.
So as you read
Please keep in mind
That these wheels may grind
But I'll never forget
That I may owe you this debt.
This knife...
This life...
I've thought about it.
And you'll get hit,
You won't like this.
So I leave you this kiss.
One day I'll come back
Follow the track
You'll find what you need.
Without the cause to bleed.
These cuts won't heal.
The worst pain I can feel,
Is the pain you leave me
So I don't know why you can't see.
The power I've left behind.
Why are you so blind?
If only you could just realize
All the pain that continues to rise
Perhaps there is a chance
Our love could soon enhance
But until that day
I will only say
The pain you've left me with,
Is pain I won't forget

Reviews

[~Shadow Kissed~]

totally great! i love it :)

[DaGirlNxtDoor]

wow that was realing amazing! definitely going as one of my favorites xD

[..R.I.P..]

Alot of pain, but definately worth reading. Great job.
~An Angel That Brings The Sweetest Of Dreams

[KatieDaray]

Alot of pain, but I like it

[deeps]

I can feel such pain in this
so emotional. flowed nicely

[Tina Kline]

A lot of pain in this poem. And possible
violence. I like it though. The pain
of a relationship ending? Maybe more?

Tina

[Brown Bull]

This poem shows your pain