whats going on?

 He works for his money,

to get us what we want.

I always forget to thank him.

Thats all he wants.

 

 

I try to do things for him

I usually do.

But when I don't 

He gets pretty angry. 

 

He gets angry at the world

blames god for his bad luck.

I tell him to be faithful

But he doesnt listen.

 

 

This is my poem

it does me well

to get my feelings out

before i scream and wail.

 

 

I wrote this about my dad he is going through a lot so i wrote this.

 

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Reviews

[Andrew'sWonderland]

This really touched me!! I can totally understand this because as I read through, I just thought about how the same can be applied over here with my dad. Great Write!!

[theunknownchick]

Well done. I like this because i can totally feel the emotions. Its very well written. But sad though =(

[D. Moore]

I can definitely relate to this in some ways. Although, substituting Dad for Mom, my mother actually doesn't get angry. But I still do not give her enough credit for all that she has done for me.

Great job! I'll pray for you and your family.

[Meghan]

Thank you both! Yeah I was mad at myself for how I was acting so I just wrote it. My family is under a lot of stress at the moment so I'm suprised you picked it up.

Thanks again!

=]

[A]

Well best writings are those written with true emotion and writing is a great stress releaser. :) This poem is good yet sad. Very well written though! :)

[CircusNerd]

it's a great description of a family under some stress. good job :-)