Grandpas Hand

Grandpas Hand

A Poem by Writer_Girl
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This poem is about my grandpa who recently passed away and i thought maybey i should write a poem. Hope you like it!

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Falling asleep to your deep heavenly voice
God taking you was not my choice.
I know where you are, and forever will be
Up in the heaves telling God " You see,"
"This is my family, i have raised them well
I have spread to them your word till i heard my last bell.
We must watch over them, for they must learn
that it is Ok, it was my time, my turn."
I know he is with my every single day
When i feel sad i do what he had taught me and pray.
You see, if we are sad and are letting out sighs
Know that he is in heaven and wipe your eyes.
For we know he would never want us the cry
We should be happy that he got his wings to fly.
We will see him again all we have to do is wait 
He'll be there to welcome us into the heavenly gates.
All this happening was unplanned
There's nothing better then holding grandpa's hand.

 

© 2012 Writer_Girl


Author's Note

Writer_Girl
Hope you like it, i know he would..♥

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Your granddad really loved it from the stars I'm sure. A very idyllic and yet a little sad. It reminds the readers that some day or other one has to leave this world. But the words of life remain. Just someone to carry them to the future just as you've done here in this nice little poem!

The rhyming is mellifluous. Just a little editing is needed for the typos.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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awww, this is so sweet and full of emotion. and i definatly felt like i could relate to this. nicely done!
-mariah

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem!! I love the emotion and the message you put in this poem. Terrific work!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Writer_Girl

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, I really appreciate it
Ezekiel Silver

8 Years Ago

No problem.
Your granddad really loved it from the stars I'm sure. A very idyllic and yet a little sad. It reminds the readers that some day or other one has to leave this world. But the words of life remain. Just someone to carry them to the future just as you've done here in this nice little poem!

The rhyming is mellifluous. Just a little editing is needed for the typos.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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