W***e

W***e

A Poem by Mel
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Had an angry night a while ago, and this is the result. Enjoy.

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They say
In every circle of friends
There's a w***e.
And yes,
Yes,
She does a little more.
Dresses like it's going
So out of style,
And the way
She gets to you
With that seductively nonseductive smile.
As per usual
She's always out late.
And every night
She has a different date.
In every circle of friends
There's a w***e.
And yes,
Yes,
She does a little more.
She starts with a kiss on the lips
And then on the neck
And yes,
Yes,
Her hair becomes a wreck.
She seems so kind,
So angelic, so sweet,
But late at night
She's having sex on a seat.
In every circle of friends
There's a w***e
And yes,
Yes,
She does a little more.

© 2008 Mel


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First I love the repeated phrase. I think this simplistic poem is so powerful that even though it focuses on one individual and one subject it will make the reader think into the past of current of who their w***e is in their group, male/female. Yes men can be w***e as well and dude can sit back and go damn you did what? Not every conquer deserve a high five. I really love what you created here. Thanks for sharing your talent and honesty. "W***e" I love the title. That is worth a 100 alone!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I think this poem is sad but so very true, there are girls who want to be loved so bad they will do anything to feel as though they are. There self esteem is gone and they don't care as long as some guy is paying attention to them. Nice write , you penned it well. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


It's true in many cases.Like I had a friend named Lauren,I think she's a w***e..And not because I don't like her but because she acts like she's all that and more,she has millions of online girl-friends and boy-friends,has boy-friends at school and STILL flirts >_< If that's not at LEAST a bit whorish then I don't know what a w***e is then. But really a great poem,speaks many volumes! It says that in at least every girl there's a spark of a w***e.At least for me that's what it says..100/100

Posted 15 Years Ago


I agree!! I'm not the w***e but my best friend in high school was a little too frisky with the football team. The whole team!! That may have made her, popular? but i don't think it's what she really wanted.
Good Job!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I have to agree with April's review as i know from experience (my ex) that this girl does exist ! Oh so sweet when we first meet but take all callers between the sheets. how's a guy supposed to know where to find real love when real love is what he seeks? These girls can trick the heart by going through the head !! I have been tricked more times then I care to brag about. A sad existance for her and a lonely search for him. Great poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


that is absoulutely true i totally get tht..im not the w***e tho!!! but yea its always the nice sweet girl tht turns out to be so dirty...really good poem it really got me thinking about my circle of friends...its a little contradictory don't u think? the girl that thinks shes so sexy never gets dates (and if they do they get bad ones) and she'll act like a b***h while the nice innocent girl gets 5 different guys and actually has sex with them lol am i making any sense?! well yea didn't mean to bore u; fantastic poem!!! :D

Posted 15 Years Ago



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