I Wish I Could Forget You

I Wish I Could Forget You

A Poem by Natalia
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"You taunt me with your presence, making me feel high as I stand in your light, then breathless when you leave."

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I see your eyes looking back at me in the faces of busy students who pass me on the side walk.

I hear your name on the lips of strangers in the crowds of hustling city tourists.

I dream of you in the deepest of sleeps that feel more real than when I'm awake.

You follow me wherever I go, and try as I might, I just can't forget you.

Oh I wish I could forget you.


You taunt me with your presence, making me feel high as I stand in your light, then breathless when you leave.

You leave a tormenting hole of anguish in my center where I wish your love resided.

Even now as I write, I can barely put words to paper, for you paralyze my fingers and steal my oxygen right out of my lungs!

I wish you would leave me be.

I wish you would let me get on with my life.

But secretly,

I wish you would love me the way I desperately and achingly love you.

© 2014 Natalia


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Hi, may I just say this line made me a fan of your work immediately. "I dream of you in the deepest of sleeps that feel more real than when I'm awake. "
I love how wonderful and real this piece seems to be.. I hope that the love or connection shared can be tied by something real, perhaps an introduction to see where life takes this brilliant poetess so we may embark on her beautiful journey.

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Natalia

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the kind words!



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Hi, may I just say this line made me a fan of your work immediately. "I dream of you in the deepest of sleeps that feel more real than when I'm awake. "
I love how wonderful and real this piece seems to be.. I hope that the love or connection shared can be tied by something real, perhaps an introduction to see where life takes this brilliant poetess so we may embark on her beautiful journey.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natalia

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the kind words!
This. Was absolutely beautiful. You are so amazing, my goodness. I wish I could write as good as you. Definitely keep up the good work. :)

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Natalia

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for saying so!
❤ Maggie ❤

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome. (:
you are very talented my friend, my advise join my group Relationship and heartbreak. Once your love addiction is cure you will rule the world:)

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Natalia

10 Years Ago

Sounds awesome! I will definitely join!
A very emotional and heart-felt write, well done :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can relate to this. You are a very gifted writer. Great work :)

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Added on January 28, 2014
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Natalia

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Hi, my name is Natalia and I'm 2o years old. I am a college student in and live in Virginia near Washington D.C. I absolutely love love love music, reading, writing, movies, drawing, and especially tr.. more..

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