Something Perfect

Didn't spend a ton of time on this, but i hope you enjoy it anyway. :)

 I wish I could change your mind,

But I don’t know what to do.

I want to sway your opinion,

On what you think of me and you.

 

You just don’t seem to see it,

What’s obvious in my eyes.

While I’m just looking at you,

Your eyes are on other guys.

 

Don’t you see we’d be perfect,

And could make each other complete?

We could be each other’s someone,

That everyone longs to meet.

 

We could have great times together,

Doing everything under the sun.

If only you saw what I see,

We’d be in for a ton of fun.

 

I wish I could change your mind,

I just don’t know what to say.

We could have something perfect,

Just take a look my way.

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

Aww hte painful truth of being best friends or close with those you love, hearing them dout on others and secretly knowign you'd be perfect for each other, but never being able to have them.. unrequted love, painful sweet but always there

[CircusNerd]

oh, the sadness of unrequited love. truly something pathetic in our society. since, of course, a raging pandemic which most people don't even realize is showing up across the globe: ignorance. keep trying :) i'm sure that certain someone will come to the right conclusion in the end if you persist! nice write, the flow was perfect and the rhyme scheme was just dandy! and your word choice....um....no offense...."adorable" and it really makes me wanna give you a hug and a pep talk :D