Hush

just a thought

Dancing in shadows

Following a light

Swinging

Leaping

Twirling

Fast into the night

Hush your giggling voices

Your joyous laugh

And listen to the song

Of someone treated wrong.

Hush children hush

Can you hear the broken man weep?

Hush children hush

So you may hope and pray

That you will never be like this one day

Author's Note

just writing

Reviews

[HopelesslyDevoted]

the thought of dancing in the shadows brings about so many things an so many different moods! this poem could be interpreted so many different ways. love it!

[Chelsea]

Really well done! You have great flow in your poetry!
And listen to the song
Of someone treated wrong.
Hush children hush
Can you hear the broken man weep?

Those lines are so powerful and thoughtful! You have a good heart----

[Poetic Beauty]

This is almost like a bedtime story done poetically.

[guiltyascharged]

Oh I like this one! (: