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Date

A Poem by zainul
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I consumed some delicious dates which inspired me to learn about this fruit.I knew from the net that dates have been a staple food of the Middle East and parts of South Asia for thousands of years.

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Delicious date fruit

Makes people happy for years

Nature grows good food

© 2012 zainul


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Ray
Yes, food makes men happy for years, it gives them life and strength to get through each day ! It's so sad to think that there are people who don't have enough of it...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wonderful wording and wisdom. Enjoyed very much. ~pat

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank for the very inspiring review.
I feel very happy to learn that you have enjoyed it.
I love the simplicity of this. It's childlike and innocent. it evokes the simple pleasure of eating good food, and it makes me smile :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the intelligent review.
You have correctly identified that It's childlike and innoc.. read more
I grew up in California .. so I have eaten a lot of Dates .. I Love them, and they are good for you ! .. I only see them in a few stores here, at Christmas time, and they are not as good as fresh .. I like your words ..

Jasmine

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Hi Jasmine,
I love your great information.This is really a pleasure to learn that you have eat.. read more
J. J.  Nightingale

11 Years Ago

Many good memories ! THANK YOU !!
zainul

11 Years Ago

I will love to read a poem on those memories of you.
YOU ARE WELCOME!!!
It truly does, and the living food is the most nutritious for us to eat, though I have a terrible weakness for cheetos, I am an avid supporter of fruits , nuts and such, so good and so good for us :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Corset

11 Years Ago

it is a sinful pleasure I indulge in more often than I should I must admit. :) lol
zainul

11 Years Ago

Go ahead with the pleasure.
I too had some.
Sometimes I repent for them. :) lol
Corset

11 Years Ago

lolol..i also repent when they appear on my backside :)
I've done a couple haikus but never on a fruit! lol I always do mine on animals good idea though! Very elequent.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Hannah for your elegant review.
Please do write on fruits.
That will be great.. read more
Dear zainul,

I greatly enjoyed your haiku. A nice piece. A simple piece, so much like the fruit.

Very best regards,

Rick

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Dear Rick,

Thank you very much for your kind and inspiring review.
I like your lo.. read more

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Added on August 14, 2012
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Dhaka, Bangladesh



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