Liar

Truth bleeds as the liar triumphs.

The liar feels proud

After each act of vile sin

Truth bleeds in silence

Reviews

[Amanda Granger]

This is wonderful. I like the description; I think it sets up the sort of malice this liar deals out that you speak of in the poem. I enjoy personification when it's used so well, and it's true that once the liar has the first say, truth slowly bleeds out but doesn't even get a chance to speak until it's too late. People that lie out of convenience or compulsively without considering the consequences of their actions really are a disturbing group, and you capture that so well in a few short lines. Well done!

[zainul]

I am very grateful to you Amanda for interpreting the piece so vividly.
I feel very blessed by your amazing review.

[Amanda Granger]

I'm so happy to hear that; it was only meant to echo my enjoyment of your poem. :) You're very welcome.

[zainul]

Thanks a lot,my dear friend :)

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Powerful!

[zainul]

Thanks for the admiring review.

[Jemima Abanilli]

this is wonderful!!!

[zainul]

Thank you Jemima for the admiring review.

[Jemima Abanilli]

I look foward to read your other work

[zainul]

I feel very honored.
Please do come and grace the works.

[michael.c.m]

So much power here. The last line, wow.

[zainul]

I feel very glad to read your admiring review.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

And death breeds within... I very much like the truth of this, kind of ironic since truth is wounded here, but perhaps the truth of it can give the truth some power to heal... if that makes any sense... Anyway, wonderful write:)

[zainul]

Thank you Beth for presenting me a warm morning with your wonderful review.I appreciate your thoughtful observation .

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Your very welcome, and I'm glad:) That's what I'm here for:)

[zainul]

:)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

:)

[Neha Godambe]

Aha! lying is a skill though! Loved the amazing imagery created here

[zainul]

Really,you have a great heart for appreciating art of lying.
Thanks for stopping to grace this little piece.

[Neha Godambe]

It is a great piece :)

[zainul]

Thank you again,talented poetess :)

[EileenMarie]

Oh written so well!! Great job!

[zainul]

Thank you for stopping by,smiling poetess.
Your review and compliments are lot to me.

[ms. barrie]

oh this is amazing, zainul! such powerful profoundness you captured here...this poem, yes, very true! stunning write! can i borrow this, sometime? credit of course will go to you :)

[zainul]

Thank you Barrie for the great applause!
Yea,you can always borrow.
You are always honest.
So,I am safe at your hands and conscience.

[ms. barrie]

aw, thank you zainul! it's always my pleasure to re-visit your writings, words of wisdom , indeed, take care, Dear Poet :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

You describe the sate of any liar in a creative way
i hate liars , and i don't know how they can sleep at night !

[zainul]

Thank you Hadeel.
The liars must face the fire of collective hate.
They should not sleep too.
They should always regret for lying.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Yes they must ..

[zainul]

I feel very confident like you.
Thanks for your strong support.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Welcome ^_^

[zainul]

^_^

[rnuff]

so truthful, nicely written

[zainul]

Thank you for the very admiring review,dear poetess.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

like the lie cuts the truth with a blade of deceit.

nice senyru...

[zainul]

Thank you Jacob for the inspiring review.
Your interpretation complements the piece.
Yes,the lie cuts the truth with a blade of deceit.