Chance

A little boy had a thrilling riding experience

The boy was riding on the smooth road
He was enjoying the place near the wood
Taking the bicycle like a toy
Ran like a magic deer the cute boy
Sometimes he stopped riding for a pause
His parents rushed to him to know the cause
He smiled happily and started again
But riding was stopped soon by rain
The parents took him under a shed
They offered him jam and bread
He took juice from lovely can
He was ready again like a sportsman
He pedaled the cycle with bright smile
The solo rider would now ride mile and mile
He looked gorgeous with colored dress
He went far away taking a race
Suddenly a group of monkey came near him
He was frightened and started to scream
His parents assured him monkeys were safe
He then stopped his bike step by step
He greeted the monkeys and played with them
Monkeys taught him a wonderful game
The monkeys joined  him in a friendly dance
The boy became happy for such a lovely chance

Reviews

[Rogue]

What a touching story of one so small who believes he has grown big with his newfound Independence. Yet, not quite so big that he does not still need the assurances and comfort of his parents. I saw wonderful images of him dancing and playing with the monkeys.

Thank you for sharing this one. I came seeking the warmth of your words and found them in this charming and whimsical tale. :)

[zainul]

Thank you Rogue for the admiring review.I am very glad that you have enjoyed the piece.You have a great sense of understanding and interpretation.I will always try to enjoy your generous company.
I adore your precious contribution. :)

[Rogue]

-grin-

Now, now we begin engaging in another string of compliments and people will start writing us ballads. :D

but, just so you know.. I adore you as well, kind soul. :)

[Angi]

What a fun tale, Zainul. The monkeys were a surprise. We don't have them wandering around here at all!

[zainul]

Angi,I am very pleased to read your amazing review.
This means a world to me. :)

[Charlene S. Bolton]

You are very talented. In writing poems and in writing stories..... :)

[zainul]

Thank you Charlene,I feel very honored.
Thanks for stopping by to grace my work with the inspiring review....:)

[Shari Vaudo]

What an unusual poem. The monkeys were a real surprise. Cute...unusual...surprising. I like it!

[zainul]

Thank you Shari for such a lovely review.
This is very inspiring and pleasant gift for me :)

[OBWhiteHawk]

Wow what a cool pattern you have going here and the feeling of the child comes through in your words.

[zainul]

Thank you for the admiring review.
This means a world to me.

[Zayra Yves]

The innocence portrayed in this poem is lovely and refreshing in a world gone mad with cynicism.

[zainul]

Adore your admiring review,Zayra :)
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.
This means a lot to me.

[Shelina Shariff-Zia]

Shows the simple joys of childhood very clearly The jam, bread, juice, rain and monkeys are evocative and linger in the mind. Good job.

[zainul]

You have charmed me Shelina by your wonderful review.
Thanks for the favor :)

[s y e]

This is so cute, such a sweet write that tells a lovely story!

Nicely done Zainul!

[zainul]

Thank you Sye for the inspiration.
This means a world to me.

[s y e]

No problem at all,
It was great!

[zainul]

:)

[Just Kim]

such a wonderful write and adventure.

[zainul]

Thank you dear poet for your inspiring review.

[h d e rushin]

Your poetry, dear sir, has grown and grown like a tiny seed planted in a meadow.
I stand as witness to how good you have become. Of how your voice has opened up
like the long coat of substance and color.

Well done sir.
dana

[zainul]

Dear Dana,
Your compliments fill my heart with joy
I can feel like the dancing happy boy.
I wonder how you can inspire a man
With your lovely review like a fan.
Thanks for stopping by,dear poet.
Best regards,
Zainul