Never Want to say Goodbye

New Romance

How we met is all a blur.
The whirlwind of romance,
Kept our minds and bodies
In a stir.
I can't tell you much, except,
I never want to say goodbye.

This blissful place that is me.
Is content for the very first time.
The loneliness seems but a dream.
I'm happier than I'd imagined, with you here.
I'm not sure what's next for us and all I'm sure of,
Never want to say goodbye.

Waking up in the morning.
Seeing your beaming smile,
Kissing your beautiful face.
I'm so euphoric in this new passion of mine, called you
I don't want to think about a thing. Just know I,
Never want to say goodbye.

When your so in love you find yourself crying in each other's arms.
So happy, that it's sad to know, we've ever spent,
Even just one day apart.
It's important for us to share, a simple thought with you.
So, right here, right now, let's agree.
That when it comes to her and to me.
While we don't know much, we know that,
On this we both agree,
We never want to say goodbye...

Author's Note

Trying to give the reader the experience of a moment in New love.

Reviews

[Peter]

The flow was good, however, the second to last line stopped me. On this (a) booth agree.... either way, this was an excellent poem very touching. I liked if very much. True love is indeed overwhelming. Put music to it, it would make a nice song.

[Greg Agee]

Thank you so much for the correction. I love input and truth, Thank you for your time !

[Érenn]

*smiling* How should i put it? i am trying to think of a melody and sing these lines once again. You definitely captured the moment(s). Love this. Love like this is so soothing ^^

[Greg Agee]

Thank you so much my friend. Km a fan of yours as well !!!

[CiNtsaLis]

*nodding head* This reads as a moving on type of flow. I like it - I loove it- *smiles* (:

[Greg Agee]

You always make me smile as well. Thank You !!

[Leran Vakem]

The experience of new love is such a wonderful feeling. This is well written just one thought the second last line should it not read "On this we both agree,". It is just a thought

L.V.

[Emily]

I really like that first stanza!
Well done!
Keep it up!!

[Greg Agee]

Thanks Emily,
I do appreciate your time in looking across genre's to read my little prose.