'Unwanted Companion'

..the despondency is present.. it makes for a horrid companion..

Ill use any and all to flee away, from the feeling of broken blue and gloomy gray. 

Any  liquid ill consume to gain, a feeling of displacement that will forever slay..

Slay the demons in my mind and in my heart, from myself I want to depart.

 

To become free from the deepest void. If only self awareness I could destroy.. 

- the despondent dreamer

Reviews

[Isolophobe]

The genius of the title is revealed through the poem, I can't do that sort of thing. Wish I could. Anyways, I think this is excellent. Doesn't waste time or words. And once again, that damned rhyming is done so perfectly I can't be anything but at least a bit jealous. Not to mention, I know the sentiment of the poem all to well.

[Jim Lozkittle]

Dayummm, Very nice, Very deep

[Brianna Brie]

Wow...you welled up a river of emotion in me with this one. I like.

[Dream Weaver]

Beautifull penned, a great piece of ink...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

your word string are intricately beaded with underlayers of depths that contain more than is apparent~ very well placed enigmatic subtle layers~