'Saviour of my Soul'

..candid appreciation...

The world makes of me an actor

Altering all, that inside, I am 

It cares not about candid expressions

My heart it doesnt want to understand

But her.. she makes me authentic

She allows my persona to live and be free

She alters the badness I feel

Fills my heart with an ecstasy dream

She wants to understand and feel every hidden expression

She makes this awful world disappear.. 

And.. 

Makes a fool of my foe, depression. 

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

Not many are able to let someone in close enough to who they are so they can have this kind of affect on them. It is the foundation of appreciation, devotion and love. Never forget to remain vulnerable and allow her into your real self. People can be like magic when someone trust them enough to let them in. Great write

[April Child]

Ah and that is it! Love sets us free to be ourselves. Beautiful.

[Kat Collins]

Very concise, to the point, and strong. My kind of poem, without all the extra dither and nonsense that isn't always needed. She's powerful...and it's a powerful love for someone to be able to see inside our darkest corners and still accept us. Bravo!

[Helpless]

awesome!

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the wording in this poem and many times love can help us through tough times and make the sun shine when there doesn't seem to be any warmth.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Simple, to the point and emotive.