lost in love

havent experienced but thought it was a good topic

caught upon love they may be

no longer seeing who is truly me

ive lost

and gained

but now i stand

suppressed

among the memories..

my mind a mess

jumbled and confused

i shall be

why do i love?

why do i see?

why have a lost the person known as me?

tears no longer come

smiles are fading

its as if im always waiting

in love they maybe

but lost upon love is all i see

supressed and constricted by loves torturous grip

drowning upon tears never spent

 

Author's Note

plz ignore spelling and grammar

Reviews

[Akira]

that was really good i thought it was deep and heart felt


keep up the good work