Rain

Rain

A Poem by zynaaa

My only purpose for waking up today

Was to sit and watch the falling rain

Then when it decides to go away

My love for it will still remain

 

When I see it falling fast

I remember those times that quickly passed

You and I were always together

I always thought we were forever

 

The sunshine never cuts it for me

All those times I just wish I could see

Something falling from the beautiful sky

The only thing that can make me cry

 

The lightning and thunder partake in a race

Just as beautiful as your sweet face

It's an amicable fight that can never be won

In the same way we were early on

 

My only purpose for waking up today 

Was to sit and watch the falling rain

Then when it decides to go away

My love for you will still remain

© 2011 zynaaa


Author's Note

zynaaa
Written over two years ago, but I re-drafted a few months back

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This is a very good write, love the rhyme scheme. Amazing write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


While I'm against the rain, dampness, snow, ice and all that. I found this piece to be inspiring, uplifting and well composed to bring across a dreamy feeling of love and the enduring qualities of positive memories. Well done!

Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it, well done (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 13, 2011
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zynaaa
zynaaa

Northamptonshire, Northamptonshire, United Kingdom



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