the castle of my love life

my current position

if you venture through my eyes,

to the lands of my soul,

the kingdom of my love life lies,

where a group of monarchs rule,

and the rightly heir named I,

is held in castle cellars,

and day by day tries not to cry,

in the presence of his captors,

 

the kingdom of my love life,

is buried deep in strife,

 

in a field not far away,

a lowly serf retires,

and dreams about the day,

when he will be a squire,

in the dream that he dreams that night,

he is told his destiny,

where he is the one to fight,

for the kingdoms liberty,

 

in the kingdom of my love life, he thought,

there is a battle to be fought,

Author's Note

if i add anything to it ill post it

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"in a field not far away,

a lowly serf retires,

and dreams about the day,

when he will be a squire,

in the dream that he dreams that night,

he is told his destiny,

where he is the one to fight,

for the kingdoms liberty,"

A very nice poem. Thank you for sharing...:)..........

[zzcomic]

Thanks, its still a work in progress. I've been having some writers block on this one. which is why its still unfinished.

[Sami Khalil]

OK. You are welcome...:)................