Albatross

Albatross

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Writing

Adrenaline Adrenaline

A Story by Albatross


Stargazing Stargazing

A Story by Albatross


Victim Victim

A Story by Albatross


Denial Denial

A Story by Albatross


Truth Truth

A Story by Albatross


Like a Dream Like a Dream

A Story by Albatross


Her Sorrow Her Sorrow

A Story by Albatross


Happiness Happiness

A Story by Albatross


Shiloh Shiloh

A Story by Albatross


Cure Cure

A Story by Albatross




About Me

I don’t write stories. I write moments. I write moments because they are all that make a life. Moments are what give people both joy and sorrow and humanity. Moments address our deepest emotions. The tiny details in the life of a person give us the ability to relate, to empathize, to laugh with and to cry with. A moment is the larger picture within a story. And so, I write about moments.

I also love drawing. A lot. Please feel free to check out my account at www.darfishy.deviantart.com/

If you like my work don't be afraid to add me as a friend or send me any requests. I love reading, and I love constructive criticism, whether I'm giving or receiving it.

And last of all, enjoy! Thank you for visiting:)


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Posted 6 Years Ago


you changed the name darfishy mam ..thank you for the read

take care

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Thank you for reviewing "Yours Truly" and thanks for pointing out the mistakes
Best regards and Happy new year

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Posted 6 Years Ago


agree. It's a bit awkward, and that may be due to not "scanning" the poem and putting it into a consistent meter. I can just hear all the old timers saying "see, I told you so..."Thanks for the review of "The Midnight Garden".

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Thanks for the review on that screenplay, I greatly appreciate it. I will continue the story and reveal more about the characters. :D

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Thanks so much for the review- I'm really happy that someone else finally got it, haha. :)
Thanks again!
-Coral-

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Hey! Thanks for your review, it was super encouraging. :)
As for the "Alice" versus "Mom" thing, it's a subtle inside look into Howard's psyche. It's somewhat explained in the second chapter. Little boy has complexes,haha.
Thank you, you're the only one that's said anything about the bullying scene. :) If anything seems weird or out of place/inconsistent, it's for a reason. I'll be mysterious and leave it at that. :)

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Thank you for the review, that was exactly what I was trying to do. The mother... is, how do I put it. She isn't passed her highschool days, and being on top having everything "perfect."

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks so much for the review- I really do appreciate it. c:

-Coral-

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Posted 7 Years Ago


thanks a lot for your in depth reviews mam . tkcr

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Thank you for the comment on my poem. It is so nice to meet you! And I really like your drawings!
Take care!
J.V.