haiku 10

 

a late snow falling

on tender spring time blossoms:

pink, though come morn, black

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Well, here's a piece of subtle but deep meaning. Wow. The beauty of the snow and the blossoms what a picture, but a beauty that kills because it comes when it is not supposed to. I don't partake in the more structured poetry writes. I find it stifling, but you made Haiku your handmaiden with this one. Also, I don't normally grade poetry but I'm going to with this one. You are getting a perfect score. Obviously. Well done.

[annie lee]

Thank you so much. I am humbled. This just rolled through my head as I was reading in bed last night. I scribbled it down, then read it to my husband (not a poetry devotee), and he said "ewwww." Your review makes up for his "ewwww."

[Pryde Foltz]

Isn't that the way the truest, most profound writes come almost in their entirety. You just have to be listening.

[Sami Khalil]

You are doing a great job on form and meaning...Thank you for penning...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Haiku at its best; perfect nature imagery and deep metaphor. Love this.

[Angi]

Bitterness kills even the most beautiful blossom. This is really, really good. I mean it. It is so hard to write Haiku. You nailed it! Angi~

[Frieda P]

What a bittersweet Haiku, dark and beautiful minichinz. Always hate when that happens...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there are many beautiful things in this life which are quite dangerous...

we are entranced by their beauty not realizing it could be a fatal attraction.

[Marie]

Very pretty...late snow kills...