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Hope

Hope

A Poem by Abraham George
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we all should have........

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I love to walk in rain

While am alone in pain

Don’t let anyone see again

That I am crying in vain

 

Only girl that I fall in love

Make her mine forever how?

Always need her in my arms

To feel all her warm charms.

 

I don’t know! She flew away

I don’t know how to find a way

I know I need to be with her anyway

I will find her someway

 


© 2017 Abraham George



Author's Note

Abraham George
i just wrote this now. No time to correct. point out the mistakes please. Critic reviews are welcome.


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Aww...! That's heart breaking yet hopeful. Hope burns and makes us strong in that time of despair.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abraham George

9 Months Ago

thanks for stopping .
This is a really sad piece :( Think we have all had a similar experience at one point.


Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short easy and effective,.
1st paragraph is well thought by writer to hide tears of pain and silent
Loneliness by music of rain...

2 and 3 par show true love and determination and resolve.... A little bit possessiveness..
B
Good poem Abraham George

Posted 1 Year Ago


Abraham George

1 Year Ago

thanks for the descriptive comment and i appreciate this.
AcasualPAWN

1 Year Ago

No problem
Hard to grasp. When the love is gone. Hope is our last desire. I liked the emotion and the wish in the words. Thank you Abraham for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Abraham George

1 Year Ago

thanks for your kind words.
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Abraham.

This poem is really sweet. keep it up

Posted 1 Year Ago


Abraham George

1 Year Ago

thanks for your comments.
This was truly wonderful resd for me. And surely enjoyed resding it as well

Posted 1 Year Ago


Abraham George

1 Year Ago

thanks for accepting my friend request and for the comments. i am glad to know you liked.
Good message ang rhyming. Bravo!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Abraham George

1 Year Ago

thanks my friend.
You are gifted Abraham!
I never can write such a piece in just a few minutes.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Abraham George

1 Year Ago

you can. thanks for your comments
ah!
so much of love i found in this poem...this is beautifully penned Abraham...
this is like a true emotion that is written here and you have written these words with ease and lots of beautiful emotions i must say!
keep it up...
keep writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

1 Year Ago

hahahah...y so?
Abraham George

1 Year Ago

i mean about the response i got for this poem. i didn't expect this much positive response.
Wajiha Nayeem

1 Year Ago

oh thts really nice then....
Hope for love is sweet and worthy....
The rhyme scheme too is nice.
Lovely poem

Posted 1 Year Ago


Abraham George

1 Year Ago

thanks for visiting here.

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Thrissur, Kerala, India



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