Men Do Not Need Us

Men Do Not Need Us

A Poem by Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
"

We are our own enemy!

"

Through the valley of the shadows,

I see many things have changed.

The shadows are pale so badly,

Even potent Death seeming strange.

 

‘O Dreadful lord, what befell you?

You've been lurking here for long,

Where's your might, that fills the night,

And the hearts of men right along.

 

Why all the shadows are weakened,

Why aren't they conquering men?

I know men have not become saints

And will never abandon sin.’

 

His majesty stood tall and looked,

At me down his black awful throne,

His eyes enkindled of deep red,

All the shadows left us alone.

 

‘O mortal, men do not need us,

They need no shadows or daemons,

We’re better here far and alone,

For men hold the worst of evils.


© 2013 Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-



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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
We are our own enemy!

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I love your words and your rhyming skills! Always a pleasure to read your work even just for those 2 characteristics that they all seem to acquire in their writing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


WOW! again great dark imagery within your sub lingual taste for the rotting parts of the nonliving. I like your black anvil craft, forming the soul to a blade to pierce the center of words...great piece

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
I am truly humble.
Touche Adam yet people are always blaming God for bad things that happened in their lives. God has punished me. No we are all responsible for own actions. I AM MY OWN WORST ENEMY. Good writing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

4 Years Ago

Thank Rob.
I am humbled
I think we are our own worst enemy, even girls. Everyone is....

Good one Adam!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

4 Years Ago

Actually Sye I mean mankind by saying "man"
Thanks for stoping by.
s y e

4 Years Ago

Ahaha, I knew that.... .-.
Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

4 Years Ago

;) .......................
That is a great piece - well penned

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

4 Years Ago

I am honored, Terry.
Thank you
Tarry Franck

4 Years Ago

My pleasure

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Added on November 3, 2013
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Tags: men, death, devil, shadows, evil, gothic, humanity, adam

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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

Amman, Middle East, Jordan



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