May's Sway

May's Sway

A Poem by Aethereal
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How the month of May changes two lover's moods. In this poem no word is more than five letters.

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May’s Sway

 

When I watch the dew

in the month of May

tears of joy ensue

at the break of day.

 

When my skies turn blue

from an inky gray,

and we join as two,

we touch every ray.

 

When gales start to brew,

and rains soak the quay

don’t give in to rue.

This shall pass away.

 

When a bow’s in view

far above the bay

we hug every hue;

our love’s here to stay.

© 2014 Aethereal


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Oh I will not get tired of smiling at the end of your writings becuase th ability to be precise and concise and to capture a theme well not an easy thing. And at every paragraph There is a condensed thought which let's us know where , how , when and more questions just by depictions based on those decriptions but that is not all the moment where (and there aren't many lines) the descriptions turn inwards and create the value of unity well that moment is precious.

Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Rene! That's right, I focus my verses like burning rays. Also notice that ea.. read more
Rene Salinas

9 Years Ago

I keep banging on about that it is rare God knows I 've sat down for hours trying to make it all be .. read more
Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Many years ago in college I used to write computer programs for my Math, Engineering and Science cla.. read more
A really wonderful piece … a sunny day by the Bay:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love it.

such Beautiful swaying words.

Thank you for sharing this Amazing piece.

Blessings. Kindred poet

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, KindredPoet!

Poet's words shall sway
at the break of d.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

you're very welcome. it's my pleasure. Blessings. Kindred poet
Beautiful use of words in the poem. I like the flow of thoughts and the perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Coyote! I know how you like Nature poems.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I do and you are welcome.
Reminds me of Robert Frost's brilliant poetry… a bloody outstanding write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review R&R Cowboy! Robert Frost was one of the best.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

Yes he most certainly was. You are welcome.
Normally I prefer this rhyme scheme as it seems the easiest. Good choice of words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Sunny! The five syllable metered style is the easiest of all. The longer the.. read more
Sunny Lotus Eyes

9 Years Ago

:)) Thanks for sharing these knowledge with me. I'm a debutante and learnt a lot from you. Keep it u.. read more
Aethereal

9 Years Ago

You're welcome!
Dear friend
Thank you for this entry to the contest. I'm impartial, of course, at this stage.
Personally I like this a lot.


Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review! I'm happy that you like it. It's a song-poem.
not quite my taste, but you do a good job with the rhyme and the five letter words.

I find this style sounds a bit forced, but i know it appeals to many---and so for its style, it works.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks, I'll take a look. It would be good to have them all in one place. Perhaps I'll find the keys.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

"Intersection Blues" is the newest...but you'll see...appreciate the interest.

jacob
Aethereal

9 Years Ago

I've made a note of that. I always suspected that your poems were of publishing quality because try .. read more

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