Perfect Day

Perfect Day

A Poem by Aethereal
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A little poem about a perfect day.

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Perfect Day

 

Pirouetting honeybee

bend your little inky knee,

bow low to that cherry tree

on the first of May. Hey!

 

Spiders spinning fancy-free

webs that build a fantasy

catch a nit, a fly, a flea

who has gone astray. Hey!

 

Robins what do you foresee?

Do you have a guarantee

of worms, maybe two or three,

as you look for prey? Hey!

 

Puffy cloud move close to me.

Do you know to what degree

I’m part of your pedigree

on this perfect day? Hey!

© 2014 Aethereal


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Quite Interesting and Intriguing.

I like this nice work Bravo.


Puffy cloud move close to me.

Do you know to what degree

I’m part of your pedigree

on this perfect day? Hey!


Pedigree I like that Beautifully
Written thank you for sharing this
beautiful piece my friend.


Love this line.

Spiders spinning fancy-free

webs that build a fantasy

catch a nit, a fly, a flea

who has gone astray. Hey!




Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for this detailed review, KindredPoet! Fleas must be careful not to go astray. Hey!
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

you're very welcome. blessings. kindred poet
I'm becoming a fan! I find your poem so enchanting and charming in greeting "A Perfect Day." It's carefree and whimsical as a poem could ever be! You have a great writing style that I find intriguing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, WindSong! It's a Classical style that uses meter and exact rhyme.
I had to smile while I read this poem. "Hey!"
You put a "Spring" in my heart wit this write. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, David! I happy that my poem changed your mood for the better.
Oh! wow, magnificent rhymes and flow, it feels like summer, so oozy, warm and relaxing. I could definitely see this in a children's book.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your detailed review, Frontier! An illustrated children's book used for teaching new word.. read more
Frontier

10 Years Ago

Definitely! Maybe you should submit it to writing-houses when you have the time. I can already hear .. read more
Hey its good ...Its simplified rhymes and a little twist or twirls of Hey ...ITS LOOKS AND SOUNDS PERFECT TO ME

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Neil! Now you know why I like clouds.
This is a perfect spring poem and it describes exactly what i love about spring the best.
I am part of your pedigree.. on this perfect day, HEY!!
I ove the optimism and energy and life force that is just what we need right now on this planet is some positive energy.. thank you
susan

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your thoughtful review, Violet! May the Life Force be with you! Hey!
Perky, smart, clever, and fun. An uplifting write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, KLGoode! Have a perky day!
Excellent portraying of perfect day, beautiful descriptions and reader can see that day along with the writer which means real talent, really proud of your writing, congrats

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Linda!
Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

You most welcome, my pleasure
My friend your a good writter and keep creating the magic...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, A. Amos! The mysterious way that song-poems pop into my head makes it seem l.. read more
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

I know and Duran Duran did a decent cover of lou reed version:) you're most welcome
I like how uplifting and happy this poem is! Great write! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Kelly!

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Added on April 17, 2014
Last Updated on April 17, 2014
Tags: Perfect, day, bee, tree, cloud, spider, robins, May

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