#YOU & ME!!

#YOU & ME!!

A Poem by Aindri_tatwalia

When there's a silence  between you nd me
i think it speaks much aloud
but you  can't hear?!?
When there's silence between you nd them 
u go wild nd push hard to know.....
THEN  WHY CAN'T YOU HEAR MINE?!?

When i'm in pain nd i need your help
but you can't see?!?
When they are in pain nd need your help
you'll give all your best 
THEN WHY CAN'T YOU SEE MINE?!?

When i flash a smile at you
even though i'm dying inside
but you won't feel it?!?
when they flash a smile at you
and pretend that everythin's fine 
you can sense it.....you can feel it....
THEN WHY CAN'T YOU FEEL MINE?!?

Man,it's not that hard.......
it's just that,
both of us are makin' it hard.....
or may be we are incompatible .......

© 2017 Aindri_tatwalia



Author's Note

Aindri_tatwalia
i hope all of you like this piece of writing of mine nd would leave constructive reviews for my scope of improvement nd plz try to ignore grammatical errors!!!

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Sky
Strange a story between two hearts in love. But you portrait it very nice. Great one!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Sky

19 Hours Ago

Thanks for accepting :)
Aindri_tatwalia

11 Hours Ago

Lmao.... What else could i say....
Sky

8 Hours Ago

:)....what else could I reply....
i hope all of you like this piece of writing of mine nd would leave constructive reviews for the scope of my improvement :)

Posted 1 Week Ago



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Aindri_tatwalia
Aindri_tatwalia

Panchkula , Panchkula , India



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Well.. I'm 16 yrs old...i'm sick nd tired of hiding my past... So i want it to be out there in front of everyone... Though you might find many grammatical errors.... So don't mock at them... Although .. more..

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