Just a thought

Just a thought

A Poem by A.marie.speaks

Unknowing
Lost
In a world
Still growing
Nothing has meaning
Days have no end
Oh, how I wish
To be a child again..

© 2015 A.marie.speaks



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So true. Oh to be a child again - innocent, without cares, worries, responsibilities etc. Always amazes me how much can be said with just a few choice words. Nice job.

Posted 1 Year Ago


A.marie.speaks

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much for taking the time to comment! I'm so happy you enjoyed this one.
A longing for those carefree days of our childhood....how simple they were......

The older we get, the wiser we become, yet our lives strangely are enshrouded in complexity. We find ourselves lost, feeling hopeless and longing for inspiration and a pathway into the light of happiness.
It is then, in those moments of despair and confusion that our minds take us back to those beautiful, innocent days of youth.
Short, poised and written so truthfully. A sweet poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


A.marie.speaks

1 Year Ago

Thank you! You've summed up my thoughts exactly.
you know we can't take the time back and relive the past but ya we can always make a wish to hold that time again when we were young kids. Those are really special moments when we were innocent, having no burdens and no responsibilities.

Enjoyed this little piece.

Armin . ...

Posted 1 Year Ago


A.marie.speaks

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading and your comments!
What a gem of a write! A real pearler! Beautiful!

Posted 1 Year Ago


A.marie.speaks

1 Year Ago

:) thank you!
And so we arrive at the solution presented to Nickademus... If you come from such traditions.
To be childlike is a blessing into oneself. I've been practicing just this skill.
A wise bit of wording shaped into a longing...

Posted 1 Year Ago


A.marie.speaks

1 Year Ago

Thank you. I'm trying to get back that as well.
I do understand this poem. To be young and be fearless again. A wish for the most of us. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
. Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


A.marie.speaks

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading and for your kind comments!
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
I agree with this.... whatever our age, we are always a work in progress.

"To be a child again..." ,
when things were innocent and wondrous and new.
(and love wasn't such a difficult task)
Loved your thought, thank you for sharing this work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


A.marie.speaks

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading and your comments!
I think everything has meaning, but I agree on the last two lines. Enjoyed the half-rhyme of end and again. Good work. Best wishes. CD

Posted 1 Year Ago


A.marie.speaks

1 Year Ago

I was just implying that most children can't grasp double or secret meanings..everything is pure and.. read more
So many things you speak in few shorten words. Yeah, the time keeps moving damn slipping off the damn fist of hands like a dust .. lost in winds. With time, things getting changed, everything becoming not so familiar as they might have been in earlier few days - in childhood. Childhood's been good, but the funny thing is, we come to know the worth of childhood only when it's gone just time, heart comes to value love, when it's goddamn gone. Short, simplistic and very deep poetry. Certainly, one of my fav. Excellent work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


A.marie.speaks

1 Year Ago

So very true! Thank you for your insightful comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it
Duality in the mix. Love it. Sweet and simple that expresses a passion for deep thinking. Now this is excellent. Thanks for sharing!

~Rob~

Posted 1 Year Ago


A.marie.speaks

1 Year Ago

Thanks for checking it out and commenting! The older I get the more I find myself repeating these li.. read more
Bohrium Guy

1 Year Ago

Sounds like you need a rose.... ;)

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