Warm Thoughts

A haiku, a first...

Don’t be missing me

think of me, of us and smile

knowing I do too

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

I think this is very lovely...makes me feel all mellow, like a bowl full of Jello!

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

Good job and great sentiment here - like a kiss blown to someone special or wishing on the same star....

Kath

[Larissa G.]

I was going to say the count might be off in the second line, but then I was reminded what haiku really was. :)
But that's OK; sometimes short is better, and I felt like this was the poem to go with Think of Me from Phantom of the Opera.
In other words, it's pretty and thoughtful. :)

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

I like your Haikus......:)
Very meaningful and to the point. Brilliant!

[Poeticpiers]

Nice try but this is a senryu
Haikus are about nature
Senrys about people

[Tammy]

Nice!

Tammy

[~amanda~]

short sweet and to the point! its funny how my review is longer than the poem itself. great write! thank you for sharing =)