The Ancient Breathes
A Book by Arotica
 While being transported Chelise gets rescued by the Keepers. With her memory gone we follow her in search for her memories and past events that led to her confinement that lasted four hundred years.  © 2015 Arotica
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My main language is Swedish so there might be some typos along the way.
This is the rewritten version of my novel that is inspired by anime and manga. The old version was too fast paced since I thought of keeping it under 10.000 words. I won't hold myself down with that goal anymore and it'll be however long it becomes(N.A. Deakins inspired me with the length of the novel.)
Thanks for taking the time to read it and be sure to comment about anything really. I love critique and feedback :)
The picture is not made by me.
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You don't have to worry about being fast paced.Because no matter what you do you won't get a faster paced than my novels (I feel bad about me being fast paced) My novels lacks description so it's fast paced.I can't brag about that so have some confidence in your work
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
Thank you :). I'll read your novels and see if a description in them is actually necessary or not. D.. read moreThank you :). I'll read your novels and see if a description in them is actually necessary or not. Description in visual novels is always lacking and it's the discussions that keeps it moving forward I believe. I'll take a look :).
What did you think of the story in The Ancient Breathe so far?
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You don't have to worry about being fast paced.Because no matter what you do you won't get a faster paced than my novels (I feel bad about me being fast paced) My novels lacks description so it's fast paced.I can't brag about that so have some confidence in your work
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
Thank you :). I'll read your novels and see if a description in them is actually necessary or not. D.. read moreThank you :). I'll read your novels and see if a description in them is actually necessary or not. Description in visual novels is always lacking and it's the discussions that keeps it moving forward I believe. I'll take a look :).
What did you think of the story in The Ancient Breathe so far?
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Added on January 21, 2014
Last Updated on June 25, 2015
Tags: magic, modernday, memoryloss, action, adventure, tragedy, romance, japan, anime, manga
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AroticaSkövde, Sweden
About
I have longed to write novels and books for a few years now and decided to write something to see if it suits me. And that my writing skills are enough for people to enjoy.
My main language is Swe.. more..
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