Her Spirit Friend

I wrote this for a contest, trying something new.

A cold whisper "stay with me" came from behind.
The slow, gentle breeze, sent chills down her spine.
"Come" another whisper floated by, her mind in a trance.
Guiding her down the basement steps, the voice wished to dance.
And dance they did, all night long, she and her spirit friend.
They danced and dance, till she'd be collapsing in the end.
Awaking in the frigid room, wondering why she was there.
The silent voice was gone for now, but always very near.
"I really don't know" she'd tell with fear, her creepy night routine.
And friends would ask "why and how?" for they could all agree;
Shivering on the basement floor was really quite bizzare.
And waking up with dizzy spells, a cause for alarm.
The fear that her house was haunted was one to not neglect.
"I'm watching you." the spirit said, with icy, bated breath.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Ahhh love this
I believe all ghosts and spirits exist
Ex husband saw one at our old house the house was 88 years old I never saw it I saw spirits at my very old family home I grew up in and felt a ghost didn’t see it at this one we all cane through alive they won’t Hurt u I feel

[Avia]

Thank you. Wow 88 years old, that house must hold a lot of stories. I do believe spirits exist, I think the spiritual world is as real as the world we do see.

[Zoya]

Chilling. Would love to have a spirit 'friend' someday lol. The rhyming was off at places though. Other than that, good job!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Very imaginative poem story I do like this one

[Avia]

I'm glad you like it :)