The Once Thought Inconceivable Voice from Self-Preservation

The Once Thought Inconceivable Voice from Self-Preservation

A Poem by B. Hudson
"

ALWAYS speak YOUR mind

"
listen to the sound,
tuck it away firm in your grasp.
inspiration may be found,
understanding,
clarity and truth.
listen,
to potential.
it protruding from the transparent and translucent person.
a voice you've never heard,
belonging to only someone for whom you believe to be irrelevant
you might ask yourself then.
why does it matter?
now you know the voice has never spoken aloud before,
and after recognition is anything but garnered,
the voice will halt and another will have taken it's place,
as if the words hadn't been spoken in first.
and the meaning will fluctuate in the air of disappearance.
only then do you come to the sudden realization,
the mysterious voice for whom has no face,
belonged to you.

© 2016 B. Hudson


Author's Note

B. Hudson
Thank you for reading, PLEASE SPROUT THOUGHTS, CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ONLY HELPS US GROW

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good poem u have wrote.... translucent voice... amazing concept


Posted 9 Years Ago


Good poem and lovely voice!

Posted 9 Years Ago


As I tell my young son all the time, "God gave you brain for a reason. Use it."

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written. I loved it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


B. Hudson

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
I like how you say to speak your voice. Never stay quiet. Enjoyed reading this poem. Ty for sharing!


Posted 9 Years Ago


B. Hudson

9 Years Ago

thank you! thanks for taking time to review!
Not sure whether it was intentional but I like the repetitive use of 'p' and 't' sounds, The last line was particularly moving: 'only then do you come to the sudden realization the mysterious voice for whom has no face belonged to you'. A very moving piece about expressing yourself and letting inhibitions go. I liked it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


B. Hudson

9 Years Ago

To be honest, it wasn't intentional. But, I see what you're saying! Thanks for reading and reviewing.. read more

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