The Show

This head looks up above to shoot
To The Savior a warm salute
This is how my respect I show
Unique are ways I take to bow

I lay flat and stamp a tight kiss
That kiss is an exotic bliss
The land accepts it, this I know
Unique are ways I take to bow

The flag shines high, a mark of pride
Its charming beauty equals bride
The head hand salute brings my glow
Unique are ways I take to bow

Child's innocence brings a big smile
And my thin lips stretch a good mile
Showers of kisses make my show
Unique are ways I take to bow

Author's Note

An experimental piece in Kyrielle form

Reviews

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Another very well written experimental piece.

You are pushing the boundaries of your poetic knowledge with each passing poem. I had to familiarise myself with the format of a Kyrielle.

It is a very well executed piece. One small note: your second line has nine syllables.....sa-vi-or is a three syllable word.

Otherwise, a neatly designed and formulated poem. Nicely done, Bala.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you for your visit and very kind words, Doodley. I appreciate your observation. But I read Savior as two syllable word ( Sav-ior). Hence I used it. May be next time around I have to be more careful about my choice of words.
Thanks again for this constructive review.

[Michael S]

Beautiful work and engaging piece reflecting your unique take on act of bowing. You certainly have great poetic skills. Thanks for sharing.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you Michael, for visiting and very encouraging words of appreciation.

[Ana Papaya]

Interesting form, I like the use of repetition and the deep meaning in the poem.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you Ana, for Your visit and appreciation.

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem my friend.
"Child's innocence brings a big smile
And my thin lips stretch a good mile
Showers of kisses make my show
Unique are ways I take to bow"
I did like the above ending. A child smile and kind kisses. A perfect life. Thank you Bala for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you Sir, for your visit and kind appreciation for this experimental piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.