Frolicking in the Ocean

The deep blue water surrounds us

as waves come ad go past us

sometimes dunking us

and other times going right through us

the sun is shining hot above

as the sound of one thousand kids frolicking at the beach 

joins the crashing waves 

in creating a symphony that fills the air.

yet all i can focus on 

as you look at me with those brown adoring eyes

is your smile.

your laugh.

your skin as the sun bounces off of it. 

at this moment all of my problems are non-existent 

my insecurities I no longer fear

all that exists in my mind 

is you 

and the ocean that surrounds us 

as we giggle like kids 

who are seeing the wonder for the first time. 

and holding each other close 

like the lovers that we are

Later that day 

will come all to fast

as we spend ever moment

as if it were our last.

We'll wash the salt and sand off of each other 

and later we may try our hand at dance 

as you take me by the hand and lead me to the floor.

then we'll venture to the boardwalk and watch the sunset.

In the early morning 

we'll make love to the tune of the ocean's crashing waves 

and lay there until the sun shows it's rays 

and we will do it all over again the next day. 

Reviews

[amdc101]

Second line: and spelled ad
Third Stanza: every spelled ever
Sorry, don't mean to be rude that kind of stuff just bother me. :) It didn't take away from the poem at all, which was pretty and well written. I enjoy your writing because I know when I start reading it I will more likely be lifted up than depressed. You would be a good writer to compete in the Let's Have Fun contest.

[dlowebianco]

It's blowing my mind how pretty this is

[Black]

really nice poem

[bluessadmood]

Ohh this is wonderful my friend,how you structure and blend words into such form
that really takes anyone who reads where ever you want to lead..its magical your way
how you describe the sea ,the crashing waves and all venturing and embracing
the crashing tides ,yes its like a symphony ,and all around ..then when sun leaves
he takes you to dance floor till the early morn,where love call,as the sun rise up again
too tired but its ok ,this will happen again and again..
lovely write..

[Sujash I. Purna]

Such a pretty ocean! Flimsily amusing!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. To be able to roam the sea and make love all night is what young in heart need to do. Repetition of a day at the ocean and with a lover are the days we need and must have to keep our sanity. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote