I Wish I Could Show You.

I Wish I Could Show You.

A Chapter by Lino Rie
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A song about a crush I had.

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I saw you that first day
and fell in love with you.
I would imagine my life 
with you by my side.
I loved the way you where
 always kind and never shy.
Never know my thoughts
of how I loved you.
How your hassle hair 
would melt away my fears.
I'll never forget what I lost.

(Chorus)
I wish I could show you how much you mean to me.
I wish wasn't shy and scared of what you'd see.
I wish I where brave like you are with me.
But I'm scared, afraid, and new to these feelings.
I lost my chance to show you me.

I see you everyday
and wonder why.
I can't ask you to be mine.
I hope some day that i can look in your eyes.
Tell you how I feel about you.
But my heart isn't strong enough
 to lose you.


© 2013 Lino Rie


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Lino Rie
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This is very precious ! I think it conveys your feelings very well. I like it alot. It sings even without the music!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I write lyrics and sing myself, love this song.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Lino Rie

11 Years Ago

thank you.
This is beautiful, I can almost hear the music bursting from your words! Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Lino Rie

11 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Lino Rie
Lino Rie

Williams, MN



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