If I Could...

If I Could...

A Poem by CreativeCookie
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It's a poem about wanting to get away from the world and trusting God to take care of you.

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If I could

I would fly into the night sky

Catch a ride on a shoot'n star

And let it carry me far

Away

From this world

With it's sorrow and it's pain

I'd soar away

                                

If I could

I would hop into a small boat

Catch a ride on the leave'n tide

let the Lord's breath fill

My sail

Trust in him

To lead me on my way

I'd sail away

 

 

 

© 2012 CreativeCookie


Author's Note

CreativeCookie
I have no idea where this came from. I think we all want to escape from the world. I guess this is an inturpretation of that. Tear me down, please!
Love,
CreativeCookie

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Sailing must be the ultimate form of freedom

totally can relate to this piece

love it

Posted 9 Years Ago


It's really a nice wish you wished. A lovely poem written in well words. Keep writing. Once again you've done a great job. The font's also great. I really liked the poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


An amazing poem as always!! lol :) 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on November 24, 2012
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CreativeCookie

Tuscaloosa, AL



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I love to write, read, sing, and act. I write all kinds of things songs, poems, stories all that kind of thing in all different genres. I mostly do fantasy, though, it's my favorite! Someday I hope to.. more..

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