THIS LOVE

Carries me to and fro
Like the Ocean's ebb and flow.
Picks me up and lays me down
makes me a peasant, hands me a crown.
Shakes me up and smoothes me out
makes me cry and makes me shout.
Empties me then fills me up
Curses me and brings me luck.
Sometimes from Hell then God above
One day a lion the next a dove.
Fills me with laughter or sometimes sorrow.
Here today ,but gone tomorrow.
Gives me pleasure and pain too,
OH THIS LOVE I HAVE FOR YOU!

Reviews

[Jerbear The Great]

once again, an awesome write. full of emotion and well structured. I must say you have quite a talent at ryhming, it seems to come easy for you, use this to your advantage. It already makes your poetry quite beautiful. keep up the good work.

[THERISA]

Sigh. Love can be a rollercoaster, which we experience all of the emotions of life in a brief moment. Forever changing our lives and the way we view those who love us. In order to understand love, we must also understand what it means to hate. Thus showing the flip of the coin, we call love. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.

Therisa

[Shadow]

With this you really get a sense for what the writer feels about the ones they love