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A Poem by Carol Maric

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Wow, this is such a radical example of it's own structure! You used words in a way I have never before seen/read. A message is in there, like all art, but you made the words art in itself by how you arranged them. The form reminds me of an eye test... but it really is a reality check for our brains because us silly humans are always freaking out about every little thing that goes wrong in day to day life. Nice work. Very different!

Posted 10 Years Ago


22 of 22 people found this review constructive.




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Every single letter has its importance! Single seemingly insignificant details can hold keys mightier than both pen and sword and yes the world is held together by the mis-use of language! The margins indeed people often forget about them the horizon of the dimension of paper, the book, the text What happens beyond them? Does the thought dis-appear? Appear somewhere else? Where? Anyway if it is it must be because it is (Parmenides) and all that is must have a spirit, its own life nothing is ever innocent in that respect because all is determined by its own being and destiny

Posted 10 Years Ago


While I found it hard to read standing on my head in some parts, I found it to be very enjoyable. :P Very interesting way to grab a reader :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very creative!
Kelly

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful. Freudian philosphy put to art. The mirror image effect is stimulating. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

That was extremely creative!

Posted 10 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

One word...rad.

Posted 10 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

This is awesome! I never would have thought of something this creative!

Posted 10 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

I certainly hope so!

Posted 10 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Your poems are so creatively done. I like the symmetry. I would have never thought to write a poem in this way. Reading your poems makes me want to write a structural poem like these. Great stuff.

Posted 10 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

this is the most interesting thing i have read on this site. thanks for your creativity.

Posted 10 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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Carol Maric
Carol Maric

And then went down to the ship, Set keel to breakers, forth on the godly sea, and . . . Ezra Pound (TCOEP).



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