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A Poem by Carol Maric

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© 2008 Carol Maric


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Wow, this is such a radical example of it's own structure! You used words in a way I have never before seen/read. A message is in there, like all art, but you made the words art in itself by how you arranged them. The form reminds me of an eye test... but it really is a reality check for our brains because us silly humans are always freaking out about every little thing that goes wrong in day to day life. Nice work. Very different!

Posted 17 Years Ago


22 of 22 people found this review constructive.




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The structure of this was quite amazing. I digged it.

Posted 17 Years Ago


18 of 26 people found this review constructive.

thats awesome

Posted 17 Years Ago


17 of 27 people found this review constructive.

This is really cool, great job

Posted 17 Years Ago


15 of 27 people found this review constructive.

I love how it's like a mirror image of itself...Very cool.

The poem itself didn't really make too much sense to me, but it looks cool.

Posted 17 Years Ago


17 of 24 people found this review constructive.

Hi Carol, like the thought of it,
----Mishel :)~

Posted 17 Years Ago


15 of 27 people found this review constructive.

wow...wild

Posted 17 Years Ago


15 of 27 people found this review constructive.

Love the crazy upside down feel and look...nice job :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


20 of 27 people found this review constructive.

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whoa! Upside down! This was a wonderful poem!


Posted 17 Years Ago


19 of 27 people found this review constructive.

Hey!!Thats great........how did you do that?!!!


Posted 17 Years Ago


18 of 29 people found this review constructive.

Wow
this poem supRISEd me.
Y
o
u
have quite a gift.






Posted 17 Years Ago


24 of 29 people found this review constructive.


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Carol Maric
Carol Maric

And then went down to the ship, Set keel to breakers, forth on the godly sea, and . . . Ezra Pound (TCOEP).



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" My life goal? Literary Immortality--without compromise. " " I would rather be skydiving while writing a book. " philosopher & polymath Author of the unpublished masterpiece PROTEAN NotUnTit.. more..

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