Ecstacy

A old poem poem. Rebirth.

 




Ecstasy

My love, I have found you.

I love you from eyes to feet.

Your brightness and sadness I need to know.

I want us nude, heart and mind free.

The hot and humid nights.

Allowed us to sleep with no secrets.

We are complete like a flowing river.

I yearn to touch your face, your breast and your waist.

In the heat of the night.

My feet touch your feet.

My lips touches your lips.

I'm yours.

My lovely one.

You are mine, always.

Your love enchanted my soul.

I  kiss your feet, your knees and your stomach.

Caress your curves and whisper.

My love.

Why are you so kind to me?


Coyote
             18 Feb. 2009
 

Author's Note

A old poem with a re-write

Reviews

[Luna]

" I yearn to touch your face, your breasts, your waist. " I love this, how it's picturesque and conveys emotion threw imagery , I wish I would write on a theme like this again , I often lose my style when I'm lost for inspiration, and your poem just helped me out.

[Coyote Poetry]

We are here to help each other. I read on day-off. 200-300 poems and stories. Give me purpose and reasons to write. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Moon]

This is so sweet and it is absolutely lovely!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Hayleigh. I appreciate the comment.

[Moon]

You're welcome

[Ashira Macy]

You are clearly a romantic in your poetry which is lovely. I will be honest in saying that the black on blue was a little hard on the eyes for me, though I may be the only one who feels this way. Gorgeous regardless of font format choice!

[Coyote Poetry]

I will try to delete. Somehow the blue came from the storage disc. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Willow Radcliffe]

Well done, good job. This is a great poem :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Willow. I appreciate the positive comment.

[Willow Radcliffe]

No problem

[Pryde Foltz]

The yearning and love in this one is palpable.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pryde for reading. One of my older poetry.

[Ruth]

Softness and beautifully poised...a return and pause to your poetry is always pleasurable xx

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Fran Marie]

a sensual write with such desire and love written into each line....nicely done!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Fran Marie. Love should be the best days of our life.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sexy...i like the line, "i want us nude, heart and mind free"

those go together quite passionately...

jacob

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jacob for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I loved these stanza's lines the most.



My love, I have found you.

I love you from eyes to feet.

Your brightness and sadness I need to know.

I want us nude, heart and mind free.

The hot and humid nights.

Allowed us to sleep with no secrets.

We are complete like a flowing river.



Beautiful once again my friend this was so
Lovely and sweet always Romantic that's what
keeps me coming back to read more of your poems
I love the romance.



This is very Inspiring write I feel a poem
coming on thank you my Romantic poet friend.


Blessings. kindred poet

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for the kind words. Love should aspire us.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

It's a pleasure my friend. you're very welcome. I enjoy reading your work. blessings. Kindred poet

[John Ryan]

very nicely written
well done

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you John for reading and the comment.