Would you, could you?

Just words.

    

                            O so sweet, O so soft

My dearest miracle, I was alone till you blessed me with your sweet kiss and your gentle voice.

Once I asked you.

Would you, could you, love me?

You whispered.

After 50 years of,

O so sweet, O so soft,

we shall know,

promises made are meaningless,

lover's meet, lover's dance and lover's learn.

Time together is the proof of lover's wisp.

I do love you.

     Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Pax]

Aw.. Sweet and tender loved, aged to get stronger... I love the sincerity of this piece my friend...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pax. I appreciate the comment.

[Chris Shaw]

What love!y words Coyote. The final three lines are special. A delight to read you. All good wishes.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Chris. I appreciate the comment my friend.

[Chris Shaw]

You are more than welcome.

[Angel_Rose1979]

That was very pretty, almost reminds me subtly in some ways of an ode to a lover.
-AngelRose

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Angel. My attempt at short poetry.

[Patricia Wedel]

“Lovers Wisp” is as crisp as flowers in bloom... dancing under the 🌙 Moon ... truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Pat. I appreciate the comment my friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such passion...especially in the last three lines...beautiful stuff here Coyote.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jacob. I always appreciate your comment.

[Onlyme]

Such sweetness from a beautiful poem. Love that lives forever. From the moment you both first spoke.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Dawn. I appreciate the comment. Love should grow.

[Rye]

Such a sweet poem here, this is a lovely write. Very sincere

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ryanna. My attempt at short poetry.