Kiss of A Crimson Poppy

Kiss of A Crimson Poppy

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Twirling in aromatic silken bliss............

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Last night I sweetly dream't of fragrant flowers
In a changing kaleidoscope a whirl
Twirling as I yielded to their stunning presence
Thrilling as they gently swirled

I twirled and twirled inhaling the freshest heaven
I never knew could possibly exist
Lost inside an unforgettable aromatic world
My senses will never forget

A touch of satin rose petals brushed my cheek
As purple violets tickled my nose
Crimson poppies slipped though my fingers
Gently kissing the tips of my toes

I believe I found heaven in my dream last night
Twirling in an aromatic silken bliss
When I felt the touch on the tips of my toes
Of a crimson poppy's kiss


© 2012 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm



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A beautiful dream to have ! It is very different from your other poetry but it is a very nice change ! It shows you can have a deep, well worded poem but also be carefree and simple; yet, no matter what you write, it comes off as elegant and lovely. Something as peaceful as flowers can make anyone feel uplifted and happy.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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LIKE THIS VERSE.."When I felt the touch on the tips of my toes
Of a crimson poppy's kiss"..;>)APPROPRIATE TO REVIST FOR VALENTINES DAY.




Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

am amazed immensely, how on earth could their be so much twirl and swirl in an overly calm heavenly atmosphere. Only a genius like you can tell an extraordinary tale with a quite ordinary settings. You've been wonderful, keep it up.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lovely write with dreamy imagery. Your heaven sounds wonderful. xx

Posted 6 Years Ago


Different flavour to this one Neva.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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awwwwwwww how beautiful and peaceful. I could imagine one twirling and twirling in a beautiful field of those red poppies.
Beautiful Neva

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely dream, lovely poem. I see you dancing in the fields and loving your life!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Damn, that is beautiful!!! I want to find that heaven


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A floral delight indeed. An exhilarating write Neva
loved it... x

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very sweet and dreamy. I want to go there.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the best line is the last... very beautiful... very romantic.

"My senses will never forget.." elaborate.. why not? Why won't they forget? They are obviously exquisite, but what makes them this way?? Show us, not tell.. we're listening :)



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 15, 2011
Last Updated on February 13, 2012
Tags: poetry, dream, poppy, crimson

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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