Impossible Girl

I feel as if the title doesn't do justice to Clara; neither does the poem. Please give your advice on how I can make this better. Thank u for reading ^-^

I can't piece her together, can't fit her in a box this small

Those coy remarks, that sly smile, those red lips

A beautiful mystery, a maze you can't keep track of

Where did she come from? How did she appear?

Fate dropped her into the world, incapable of controlling her

Destiny has no grip on it, neither can destiny decide where she goes

Impossible girl, impossible girl

Wrap your head around it, and you'll lose it

Get too close and you get burned 

Like a badly made souffle 

Grab her hand and run, 

Remember

Remember 

You clever boy

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of thoughts and the want of the words.
"Impossible girl, impossible girl
Wrap your head around it, and you'll lose it
Get too close and you get burned
Like a badly made souffle "
The above lines were so good. Nice ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Chidoriflower]

Thanks you so much X3

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Philip Muls]

She must have quite a personality your i possible girl. Part of her attraction I'd say. Could you read my Lovesick, I'd appreciate your opinion.

Well done.

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you and I will :)

[GarithRoland132]

Yes! First DW thing I've found on here haha I love it! Glad you watch the series! Loved the description and the little references inside this big one haha this poem is definitely bigger on the inside!

[Chidoriflower]

OMG THANK YOU a fellow nerd :D :D :D I got that reference ;) thank u for your review

[Aphy!]

Very nice and interesting piece..although I'm a bit offended by how you made women/most girls seem. Like we're impossible to please or even impossible to approach. But hey...that's what I thought about after reading this piece.
But anyway, I loved it
I enjoyed reading it
I related to it
It was amazing
Aphy

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you so much!! And it's about a specific girl....

[Aphy!]

On behalf of all the "impossible girls" I hope she comes around...really females aren't that bad

[Chidoriflower]

IMPOSSIBLE GIRL*

[Chidoriflower]

It's about Clara from Doctor Who.

[Aphy!]

Oooooh, the series!! (blond moment) now it makes sense.