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It was late in September

I remember 

The day my blue skies

Faded back to black

I was eighteen years old

I was shivering cold

The earth still damp from the rain

You left me standing there

Drenched in the tears

That you made me cry

Without a care you turned and left

Not bothering to look back at the mess you made

No words were exchanged

You left me all alone

On that lonely, deserted path

For me to crash

Without a sound

I fall to the ground

I silently scream

Is this a dream?

Now you're gone

Why did you have to die? 

Reviews

[Josh]

This is quite sad.. nicely written.

[SilentDreamer]

So sad, so relatable. Great flow, and very well written

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

meaningfully composed~ the last line brings it sharply home~

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. beautifully written ... extremely poignant ... the way these words tell a story is simple and enchanting ... you struck gold with the end ...

[Trevor]

wow, this is incredible. What an impact it leaves!