Beautiful reflection

Beautiful reflection

A Poem by Corset





















Beautiful reflection
Wanaka,
beautiful reflections
A white horsed cloud
dreams
dustbowl buffalo
feathered and bare
howls of a distant flute
wolf on cliffs of bravery
mountain faces
a Giant's Causeway
but too critical

and we set it upon you
his electric chair
to sir with love
uncomfortable heavy
should we define government
around your sphere

Wanaka
moon's light in soul reflection
in winter's white and pine berry blue
Cardinal red winged winter robes
die down to brown, black eyed
with your cornflower lashes

inside is;

a silhouette dancing
on the light of your eye
Wanaka
black eye gleaming 
dilated ebony 
a burst of sun
oh organdy sky: a
beautiful reflection.






© 2017 Corset



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well done Corset,
beautiful tapestry

Posted 2 Months Ago


Corset

2 Months Ago

Thank you , I'm glad you thought so.
Beautiful artwork and amazing words and thoughts. Your words gentle, kind and worthwhile. I had to read again dear friend. Thank you Corset for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


Corset

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much Coyote, one of these days I may be tempted to collect that reward, lol, but being .. read more
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You made your point gentle and with reasons. You are welcome dear Corset.
you painted some lovely images with your words,,texas style

Posted 5 Months Ago


Corset

5 Months Ago

hey thanks wordman, nice to see you XD
 wordman

5 Months Ago

you`re welcome,always nice to see you
Corset

5 Months Ago

Thank you !
I will be honest. I feel the emotion. There is a story I want to follow.. In the moment, I feel pain.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Jon Roggie

10 Months Ago

The comment dustbowl buffalo dragged me in.
Mother was born in Oklahoma.
Raised in Cal.. read more
Corset

10 Months Ago

you sound as if you've lead a colorful life XD
Jon Roggie

10 Months Ago

You could say that. Met Frank Sinatra's mom. Dad delivered milk to him, and her each week. Walked.. read more
i journeyed through the imagery of this---a day's worth, a night's worth...a poem's worth...
exquisite...
j.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Corset

10 Months Ago

A wide smile for your review J. thank you!! XD
"Wanaka" melodic Maori name...the lake "moon's light in soul's reflection" mysterious, prismatic, mirror..Lovely, lyrical, flowing poem, like the lake, with stellar imagery and metaphor- "a burst of sun..oh organdy sky"...Beautifully written.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Corset

10 Months Ago

Such a beautiful review, thank you Annette!
Annette Pisano-Higley

10 Months Ago

You are very welcome. A pleasure to read!
beauty and dream

a delicious poetry

Posted 10 Months Ago


Corset

10 Months Ago

Hello Nebula, great moniker, Thank you for your comments.
Your poem brings out a world beauty that mesmerizes the mind with images of farmland and desert sands.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Corset

10 Months Ago

Hey you, thank you !

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