Beautiful reflection

Beautiful reflection

A Poem by Corset





















Beautiful reflection
Wanaka,
beautiful reflections
A white horsed cloud
dreams
dustbowl buffalo
feathered and bare
howls of a distant flute
wolf on cliffs of bravery
mountain faces
a Giant's Causeway
but too critical

and we set it upon you
his electric chair
to sir with love
uncomfortable heavy
should we define government
around your sphere

Wanaka
moon's light in soul reflection
in winter's white and pine berry blue
Cardinal red winged winter robes
die down to brown, black eyed
with your cornflower lashes

inside is;

a silhouette dancing
on the light of your eye
Wanaka
black eye gleaming 
dilated ebony 
a burst of sun
oh organdy sky: a
beautiful reflection.






© 2017 Corset



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you painted some lovely images with your words,,texas style

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Corset

2 Weeks Ago

hey thanks wordman, nice to see you XD
 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

you`re welcome,always nice to see you
Corset

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you !
I will be honest. I feel the emotion. There is a story I want to follow.. In the moment, I feel pain.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Jon Roggie

5 Months Ago

The comment dustbowl buffalo dragged me in.
Mother was born in Oklahoma.
Raised in Cal.. read more
Corset

5 Months Ago

you sound as if you've lead a colorful life XD
Jon Roggie

5 Months Ago

You could say that. Met Frank Sinatra's mom. Dad delivered milk to him, and her each week. Walked.. read more
i journeyed through the imagery of this---a day's worth, a night's worth...a poem's worth...
exquisite...
j.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Corset

5 Months Ago

A wide smile for your review J. thank you!! XD
"Wanaka" melodic Maori name...the lake "moon's light in soul's reflection" mysterious, prismatic, mirror..Lovely, lyrical, flowing poem, like the lake, with stellar imagery and metaphor- "a burst of sun..oh organdy sky"...Beautifully written.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Corset

5 Months Ago

Such a beautiful review, thank you Annette!
Annette Pisano Higley

5 Months Ago

You are very welcome. A pleasure to read!
beauty and dream

a delicious poetry

Posted 5 Months Ago


Corset

5 Months Ago

Hello Nebula, great moniker, Thank you for your comments.
Your poem brings out a world beauty that mesmerizes the mind with images of farmland and desert sands.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Corset

5 Months Ago

Hey you, thank you !

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Corset
Corset

San Antonio, TX



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