Edge of Shadows

Edge of Shadows

A Poem by Crusader 73

A broken mind
dreams hopeless scenes......
Dancing at the edge of the shadows.
The empty soul
in darkness screams......
Dancing at the edge of infinity.
A drowning heart
my demons live......
Dancing at the fires of impurity.
The faded life
none left to give......
Abandoned in the dark of the shadows.

© 2008 Crusader 73


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This slammed me. Excellent piece and I especially loved the lines:

A broken mind
dreams hopeless scenes......

brilliant job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Thats how I feel, I'm alone in my dark wasteland

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Crusader 73
Crusader 73

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I'm not a real writer, I just play one on TV. Well, OK.....seriously, my career is in sales. Career?? AARRGH! That means I've grown up I guess. Well, a little anyway. I've written songs and poet.. more..

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A Poem by Crusader 73



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