The Sermon

The Sermon

A Poem by The Winter Grey
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To a dream, and a collectively held breath.

"

Opening prayer, all are called to attention.

She fights back a shiver of apprehension.

 

The young preacher greets the room with a grin.

Forgive me, Father, for I fear I shall sin.

 

...he addresses the crowd...

 

"Tell me of truth, for you hide it so well.

Tell me of love, and how far that you fell."

 

She bites down on her lip, desire betrayed.

A front row saint with her sins on display.

 

She longs for his touch, too strong to object.

His fingertips tracing the nape of her neck.

 

...she nearly whispers aloud...

 

"Tell me of passion, and the hearts it set free.

Tell me of love, and whether you feel it for me."

 

He swallows hard and then straightens his tie.

Lost to the fervor he sees in her eyes.

 

He cannot bring himself to look away.

Helpless before her, a powerless prey.

 

She clutches her cross and begs God for direction.

He closes his eyes and is consumed by the question.

 

...to neither, a pause of doubt...

 

"Tell me of Jesus, does He let this one stand?

Are even the guilty guided to love by His hand?"

© 2012 The Winter Grey


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The Winter Grey
I'll let this one speak for itself...

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Oh how I love your writing so very much. Have you read The Scarlet Letter? This poem reminded me so much of that book. You created the tension masterfully. I could see it all playing out before my eyes. Just lovely! I rather like these little dark twists that subtle, yet at the same time screaming for attention. Wonderful, wonderful.

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My goodness.. WOW!! You have such a talent! Just absolutely amazing! Flawless.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What an incredible writer you are. This is so perfectly done!

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Omg!! I love this! It's so good. Very orginal and well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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the poems is well written and it make me think about the meaning. I think you capture the person behind the pulpit fight the same battles as the people in the pews. Good stuff!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh how I love your writing so very much. Have you read The Scarlet Letter? This poem reminded me so much of that book. You created the tension masterfully. I could see it all playing out before my eyes. Just lovely! I rather like these little dark twists that subtle, yet at the same time screaming for attention. Wonderful, wonderful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moving write ....well versed

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amazing i love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this.. nice one ♥

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Dios Mio!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Bats In The Belfry

11 Years Ago

I forgot to breathe and almost fell out of my hotel bed when I first read this. ; )
An interesting piece...Th rhyme scheme flowed perfectly in each part...Well done!
Thanks for sharing...
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


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