Love And Peace

A poem about love and peace

love is caring, love is sharing

peace means no one fight, no one dies.

love is friendship, love is helping

peace means no more wars, no more tears.

we are all the same thing, we are all equal

we are all extraordinary, we should all live in peace. 

I can see humans, but I can't see humanity

people die, people cry.

people lose lovers, people lose friends

the lives that were lost were someone's father mother friend.

lives that were wasted see their loved ones depressed

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Okay! I can understand from your words that you really think about this world and our society, this is another thoughtful write, the concept is really good, and I believe there are very few people who think this way... Love and peace these are the two things that we all crave for in life but sadly most of the time we get the opposite...

Note : in the second stanza second line the word school may be 'should'...

I enjoyed the structure of the poem and the concept, it is inspiring and thought provoking.... You have a very good soul, don't ever lose it my frnd.... God bless you....

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Danai]

Thank you a lot my friend for your good words

[Inject Positivity]

You are wholeheartedly welcomed my frnd....

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"love is caring, love is sharing
peace means no one fight, no one dies.
love is friendship, love is helping
peace means no more wars, no more tears."
If we led with kindness, concern and love. Would be a better world. Life can be hard, but we must look for the good ending. Thank you Danai for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote