Am I Blind ?

Am I Blind ?

A Poem by Tasha

Am I blind to not see
what is in front of me?
is it because I choose
not to see?

Am I blind for not
realizing that
I'm not the
only one...

I'm not the only one
that  fell in your trap,
to be caught in
your web of lies...

Am I blind to see
that you hurt
so many
other people,
I'm just a new addition
to the list,
a list no one
would ever want
to be on

Was I that blind
to let my emotions
get the best of me

I thought things were fine
then it suddenly hit me
that they weren't...

I was just to blind to realize it...

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
I don't know what the problem is, but it seems like everyone's having relationship problems. This is for another friend. I hope I can give her some good advice.

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I guess we all have relationship problems now and then.
I am sorry you have a friend going through this.
But that is what relationships are all about.
No relationship is perfect, we all go through hard times.
That is what makes a relationship stronger.
Sometimes we need to sit and be alone and think things through,
Sometimes you need to talk to through. Which ever is the easiest.
Love takes two...commucation is the key.
It may hurt and bring tears but the thing is you pull through together.

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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ah, still we fall for the same love pit. some works. some doesn't. and life moves on with yet another ache..but it's something to be experienced. advices will remain unheard for a long time, coz we hope that everything will be fine any moment..but will they? :) Your friend is blinded by love. lovely poem dear :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hard to give advice. Most people led by own heart. Being blind isn't the problem sometime. Hard to know what to do in a bad situation. I like the emotion and the desire of this poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW, this is amazing, I'm speechless. Excellent work Ta'Shandra, your a talented writer :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I kinda needed this poem Thank you for writtin it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's a great poem. :) Hope it helps your friend. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You could really feel the pain in that piece. I don't think she was blind as much as she was lonely ... All of us want to belong ... even at the cost of one's own soul.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your note is exactly how I felt reading this one. And I follow what your saying. It's almost like everything is going into total chaos, starting with outstretched relationship problems.
It's sad

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow.... nice job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its so easy to blinded by infatuation. I really like how this poem embodies that. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this, nice job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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