The Descent

Today's current emotion.

Can I follow you?

Can I please?

Or are you another illusion

Sent to torment and tease

Please don't come closer

Let me fade away

I promise you won't miss me

I'll see you yesterday

I cherish the sorrow

I envy those screams

the sound of my heart

being torn by the seams.

Author's Note

I can't think of anything else to add to it at the moment. My thoughts and feelings are a scrambled mess and this is all I could put into words.

Reviews

[Jersey]

First let me just say wow. For something that was just created out of a scrambled mess, its really excelent. The first two lines make me think of a lost child for some reason, but thats a good thing because it brings about emotion. I love how it changes around to "Or are you another illusion" because it makes you think words like pyscho. The rest of the lines flow amazingly, I can image so many different reasons for the words with is good because it allows more people to relate better.

[jacjac44]

Short yet intriguing, a good pleasure to read , though saddening.