veins

sad truth

veins are like rivers,

in the end they all run dry,

hurt is like sinners,

and the crimson tears they cry,

depression is like a permanent sting,

a sting that wont go away,

heartbreak like a doll on some string,

losing control of what to say,

love is like a drug,

though people think it but a game,

your lost and needing a hug,

my love for you is strong like a flame 

Reviews

[Neville]

I came here because I was keen to see where you were coming from .. it seems you have come a long way since July 27th 2017 .. I sincerely hope life is now being more kind .. oh' and I was sadly not disappointed ..

Neville

[Lykos]

Love this, perfect descriptions and you word them so well. Plus it rhymes, I love any poem that rhymes. Well done Psychogirl!!

[DarkArtz 0703]

to be honest it came to me while I was crying so I wrote everything down thank you Lykos

[Lykos]

Writing on a feeling is the best way to write, so much more emotion goes into it. You connect to so much more people as well.

[DarkArtz 0703]

true very true A.