it hurts

A.j

it hurts again

I can't bare this feeling

I want it to end

but the world has me reeling

I can't seem to breathe

want this feeling to leave

Author's Note

bad day.... down and depressed so

Reviews

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Bad day comes and goes if you want to
and also stays - IF YOU WANT IT TO
So, Pick up what you love and get going
Imagine a crown over your head and You'll feel like a Queen always Queen :)

[DarkArtz 0703]

thank you... really I am thankful

[DeNine]

I love it. The feeling is relatable and I can feel the hurt in my chest from life. Great rythem. Well done.

[DarkArtz 0703]

thank you very much DeNine

[AlexofElsewhere]

Haunting and relatable. The vulnerability is apparent and inspiring. Hang tough. Thanks for sharing!

[DarkArtz 0703]

thank you for your review
K.