it hurts

it hurts

A Poem by soldier onwards
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A.j

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it hurts again

I can't bare this feeling

I want it to end

but the world has me reeling

I can't seem to breathe

want this feeling to leave






© 2017 soldier onwards



Author's Note

soldier onwards
bad day.... down and depressed so

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Bad day comes and goes if you want to
and also stays - IF YOU WANT IT TO
So, Pick up what you love and get going
Imagine a crown over your head and You'll feel like a Queen always Queen :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soldier onwards

8 Months Ago

thank you... really I am thankful
I love it. The feeling is relatable and I can feel the hurt in my chest from life. Great rythem. Well done.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soldier onwards

8 Months Ago

thank you very much DeNine
Haunting and relatable. The vulnerability is apparent and inspiring. Hang tough. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soldier onwards

8 Months Ago

thank you for your review
K.

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Added on October 12, 2017
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people judge what they cant handle. I judge what I can't help. every second was painful enough... but to relive it.... it kills me. more..

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