it hurts

it hurts

A Poem by DarkArtz 2811
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it hurts again

I can't bare this feeling

I want it to end

but the world has me reeling

I can't seem to breathe

want this feeling to leave






© 2017 DarkArtz 2811



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DarkArtz 2811
bad day.... down and depressed so

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Bad day comes and goes if you want to
and also stays - IF YOU WANT IT TO
So, Pick up what you love and get going
Imagine a crown over your head and You'll feel like a Queen always Queen :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkArtz 2811

11 Months Ago

thank you... really I am thankful
I love it. The feeling is relatable and I can feel the hurt in my chest from life. Great rythem. Well done.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkArtz 2811

11 Months Ago

thank you very much DeNine
Haunting and relatable. The vulnerability is apparent and inspiring. Hang tough. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkArtz 2811

11 Months Ago

thank you for your review
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Added on October 12, 2017
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DarkArtz 2811
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people judge what they cant handle. I judge what I can't help. every second was painful enough... but to relive it.... it kills me. more..

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